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The break in by ~85396:icon85396:



   Its two thirty in the morning when loud crash can be heard down stares in the living room. Both gardevoir and blaziken hear the noise and get out of bed to see what has happened.  As they reach the bottom of the steppes they see two machokes, one standing in front of the door and the other tying up there daughter kirlia. Blaziken prepares to do a blaze kick but is K.O.’d by a fierce focuses punch to the back of his head.  As gardevoir witness this she tries to run over and wake up her boyfriend but the machoke that just clobbered him takes out a clouth socked in chloroform and covers her mouth so she is unable to scream.  As this all happens kirlia also tries to scream but the first machoke takes out a normal clouth and stuffs it in kirlia’s mouth then grabs a roll of duck tape and puts a strip over kirlia’s mouth rendering her screams of fear to barely hirable muffles of cries.  Not long after the chloroform kicks in and gardevoir fall unconsince on the floor, emedintly after the second machoke singles the first to throw him the roll of tape.  Soon afterwards he tapes gardevoir’s wrists, legs, and mouth tightly shut and then the machokes carry the girls out to their car and throw both of them into the trunk, but not before leaving a ransom note on the coffee table. They get in the car and start up the engine and just as they pull away low but vary heavy sobs can be hired from kirlia crying in the trunk curled up next to uncounince mother as they speed off into the night.
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Author's Comments

This is just another pokemon DID fan fic I wrote out of bordom. Its does have a story line but I won't write it unless someone wants me to.

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:iconflippermon:
who was the ransom note written to? You should continue the story, it was very interesting
:iconflippermon:
....stupid me the ransom note was for blaziken never mind that stupid question.
:icon85396:
If you really wan\'t me to then I will.
:iconumbreonnlatias:
lol But can't Kirlia use telapathy to kill the machokes!? Machokes are fighting and fighting are weak to phychic

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:icon85396:
I'll explain that in part 2.
:icondawn773:
OMG PlZ CONTINUE!



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:iconshadowwalker11:
this sound great! you GOTTA continue it

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May 23, 2008
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